Friday, February 26, 2010

Writing Conventions

Fix these sentences:
she claims she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park when the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were the police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.

2. Today i finished my News Report , that i did on Thursday ; but now im workin on this .
I finally finished my news report today which is Thursday ; but now i have to work on this on to finsh .

3 It didnt change my mind but i think of high school better.
I didn't change my mind about think high school is better then ever .

4. I did not watch the hole movie.
I didn't want to watch the hole movie .

5. i do not like to writ books or paragraph.
I don't like to write books or paragraphs .

6. actually i found the movie very entertaining cause i understanded all of it.
I actually foung the movie entertaining , because i understand all of it .

7. I think theyre targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.
I think their tarageting people ; who would think what it is like to be hung over and people who loves comedy .

8. pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.
The pilot ejected him from a southwest airlines flight from Oakland to burbank california , saying he can't fit properly in a single seat .

9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.
I write great enoguh that you can read it with perfect grammer some what .

10. I dont write that much but im prety confident about my ability.
I don't really write that much but i'm prety confident about my ability .

11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that anyone can write.****

12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other

13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then i ran outta time , so just a few minutes ago i just finished it.
I started on it thursday but didn't get to finsh it , so a few minutes ago i did .

14. I hope i have a better english experience using the computers.
I hope i will have a better english experience using the computer like the teacher thinks it is going to .

15. The movie i enjoy the most is The Hang Over it was histarical!.
I movie i enjoyed the most was the hang over , it was histarical ! .

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